My Secret Friend

Something spooky just in time for Halloween...

The writing here is slightly lazy/abbreviated compared to my regular work for one reason -- I plan on directing/producing the thing myself! 

Locations are all spots around where I live. The anonymous genitalia is a real photo that keeps cropping up on signs around the area and it's completely irrelevant, but eerie, and I think it would be a shame not to use.  

Please let me know what you think! Any areas where you think I can condense things more, any areas that could be creepier. Is the character arc clear, etc. I want to beat this sucker out ASAP so I can start advertising for actors and crew. 

I want to keep dialogue to a minimum because I know it will be easier for the actors. I wonder if I even need those lines of dialogue which I've included now. 

Excuse my disjointedness -- I'm hopped up on Monster. Thanks for looking.